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it was a cold night and the air was humid and glumy. danny walkd into the the cold and arid room in the haunted hous. it was full off spidre webs and mice. "hello?" saed danny. "im lost and i need a place to say." just then he headr a sound comign from the rafter. it was a vois, a very deep vois. "daaaaaneeeee" it saed. "what? what do you want?" "I wnat your ghost powers." saed the the vois. "my powers?" saed danny. "yes. i neeed theeem in ordeeer tooo saaave yooou" "how will you save me if you take my powers?"

35 years later:

"jordan, i dont think you cn use the internet was invented so you could find picturs of ghosts" "no", said dammy, "it was inventd so people could chat and stuff" dammy was smart like that.
jordan stared at dammy. "Well... I'm out of ideas." "IDEAS???" dammy yelled. "You threw a rock at the thing!" "Hehe, yah." sam stared absent-mindedly at the robot. "Well? A rock doesn't does do much does it?" "I'm thinkin'! Give me five minutes..." "In five minutes we'll be dead, loser." danny glared at sam. "dammy, you can not possibly defeat my giant fighting robot. It is giant. It fights. And it is a robot," vlad said through the microphone on the robot. "Chya, we are in DEEP trouble." jordan said.
"Not to worry! For on this day, i jordan, be the one to save dammy!" "Are you done yet?" Asked dammy. jordan and danny fought each other while ami watched, laughing. And while ami was laughing dammy pushed a button on the foot of the 60-foot robot, sendin vlad backfrom hence he came.
©2007-2009 ~Meg-Phantom
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Author's Comments

this is the first part of my fanficiton.

i hope you like it. :)

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:iconongakuusagi:
It's a robot, AND it fights!? HOLY CRAP!
:iconramensara:
You must improve your grammar or everybody will lose interest on the fic, just like I did.

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- so....um... i herd you liek mudkips -

~prettyboyleon
:iconmeg-phantom:
lol ya, but it loses. ^__^

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Danny: Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz!
:iconmeg-phantom:
well if u dont like danny phantom you might not like the fic i guess

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Danny: Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz!
:iconramensara:
I don't like Danny Phantom, but, if you want to make a good (or at least aceptable) fanfic, you must have a decent grammar.

I mean, when I read something that is supposed to be serious, if there's no grammar at all, it'll look just silly, and people probably will lose interest.

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- so....um... i herd you liek mudkips -

~prettyboyleon
:iconxxxxhxc-4-lyfe11xxxx:
Learn to spell plz.
I sort of like Danny Phantom and your fic is pushing me away. AWAY.

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"CAWRLIN IN MY SKIIIIN, THES WUNDZ TEY WILL NOT HEELLLLL!"-form my favv song by Lnikin Park!!1
:iconmeg-phantom:
IM USING SPELL CHECK

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Danny: Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz!
:iconxxxxhxc-4-lyfe11xxxx:
WELL THEN YOUR SPELL CHECK SUCKS.
Jesus Christ.

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"CAWRLIN IN MY SKIIIIN, THES WUNDZ TEY WILL NOT HEELLLLL!"-form my favv song by Lnikin Park!!1
:iconmeg-phantom:
STOP F****** INSULTING ME!!!! MY ART IS NOT CRAPPY!!!

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Danny: Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz! Jazz is a spaz!

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